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an honest breath all about death - defianceuvscience - 06-22-2009

in words we spread thoughts
we think and speak with knots,

these end in death 4 all
like god's missed call,

it is because of our desire 4 pleasure
and any sin really has no "measure",

and this is our shared dance
and i enjoy the chance


RE: an honest breath all about death - paigenumber - 06-22-2009

Very interesting phrasing.