Nocturnal Romance— Gardenia
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Nocturnal Romance— Gardenia
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03-30-2008, 10:15 PM
tamtam Wrote:The above sounds like we just jumped into the middle of your story...in some descriptive passages, I got lost as to who you were describing. I really appreciate your critique. I have a horrid habit of starting up in medias res, so I'll certainly pay attention to your suggestions! Thankyou very much. |
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Nocturnal Romance— Gardenia - by Epigraph - 03-24-2008, 02:16 PM
RE: Nocturnal Romance— Gardenia - by tamtam - 03-27-2008, 09:38 PM
RE: Nocturnal Romance— Gardenia - by Epigraph - 03-30-2008, 10:15 PM
RE: Nocturnal Romance— Gardenia - by Desdemona - 04-21-2008, 12:03 AM
RE: Nocturnal Romance— Gardenia - by GothicRomance - 02-20-2009, 04:11 PM
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