07-27-2007, 08:07 PM
Mostly with respect to time. One big example is that the "heroine" who is telling the story mentions her sister is about to become 18. A few paragraphs later she states that she is very protective of her sister because of something that happened 16 years ago when her sister was 4. Now, I don't know how that could be. Several more references are made to the fact that her sister is almost 18 and suddenly she has her 19th birthday. Or, how about when her grandmother has a heart attack and was told to stay in bed for 3 days. Shortly after the attack, she receives something in the post that gives her 3 days to act and then something was going to happen. This event happens, the grandmother wants to get out of bed and she begs her grandmother to obey doctor's orders to stay in bed. Things like that. She doesn't seem to remember when events happen and twists them around to fit the unraveling of the mystery.